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I;ve been fixing up a menu screen for my website. It's a work in progress but I have no name or logo for te site as of yet, so consider the second counter canned by then. Should I use this as an flash banner or not. Critque is welcome.

Made in Macromedia Flash 8

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:iconrazzie27:
Fat kitty, eater of planets, would make more of a splatter. ;P

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"We are what we are Scott,wishing wont change a blessed thing,nor will feeling sorry for ourselves".
-Kurt Wagner (Uncanny X-Men#109)
:icondagmar-neo:
That's not critique. Nor is it advanced. Keep out of my head D:

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:iconhalopikachu:
poor kitties xD

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:iconappocalypsedemon8:
After about 200 seconds of that song and kitten-destruction, the only critique I could possibly have is the timing of the...destroying thing (no idea what to call it.) If it was just a little slower, it would look more like it was actually crushing the kittens. :3
Awesome work, dude. Seriously, I love it. : D

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Having the sound as an option is a nice touch as I generally can't *stand* music on banners... it's usually a huge distraction considering I have music on all the time when I'm browsing the internet.
I'm not sure how to explain this, but the kittens seem to zip across the screen a bit too fast to follow what exactly they are (even if they do seem to match the music perfectly). And watching it for this long (500 seconds and counting o___o) it seems they ram into the spikes of the smasher before they're actually crushed.
Other than that... oh *man* I could watch this all day o_o I kid you not.

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It’s a state of mind~
:iconrazzie27:
It's advanced for me! :omfg:

Be happy i didn't say "Lol"

But if you want critique;
I suggest that you have the red light turn blue and the yellow light turn green, it's a transition that's more feasible on the eyes.
Also I think you should have a larger variety of kitten being chomped, and at a faster rate because it would make the timing of the claw more amusing.

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"We are what we are Scott,wishing wont change a blessed thing,nor will feeling sorry for ourselves".
-Kurt Wagner (Uncanny X-Men#109)
:iconthundercs:
I would like if the kitties went a LITTLE bit further before being smooshed. Like, under the exact center of the crusher. More amusing that way. =o

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:iconyiddishsitcom:
Tiny Tim? Really. But I do agree with you he is the perfect song to compete cat genocide too. :)

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Throw the switch and watch he twitch. The said he was the son of a bitch. They said he was the son of a bastard, and afterwards his dad got plastered.
:iconviolet-the-haunted:
nice song, but i rlly like kittens so sorry i have to say, i really really hate this. Good job on the animation tho

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